"For ages we have been still, eyes on the horizon, watching life grow and spread, our crown of foliage sheltering the small from the sun, our leaves used as beds. We protected them and their dead fed us.

We were at peace... And in harmony.

Then our protected left us. They replace the shadow of our leaves with shields and beds of leaves with beds or iron.

They turned against us. Many brothers fell, unable to grasp the motive of this aggression. We suffered knowing their massacre revealed our rôle in this world.

Our blood, our flesh soothed them, and even dead, we protected them of their primal instincts.

We embraced our purpose and acted to protect them from themselves.

Today, the last is dead, at peace, under a tree. Now we will reach for the stars, ready to save the universe from its own extinction."

Fiu, take long time to decide if I post or not, yep it's short but I think Unfallen need a big quest and what better like quest to pacify the universe :D

Feel free to comment, criticize, give advice, I'm totally open about that !

Hope we can continue to edit after the deadline :x

PS: sorry for my English, not my first language 

I enjoyed how your Unfallen is committed to pacifism and even the purpose of pacifying the entire universe. And I could imagine how there could be two main schools of pacifism in the Unfallen: a militarism where pacifism is conquer and pacify and the other one is to guide and nurture.

I apologize for not getting to your post sooner to help with spelling, grammar and other suggestions to help you improve your submission.

Thanks , yep that the idea, I want to make them they can use three path of conquer for  the game and I'm a little sad, I hope we get one week to polish and get the vote before the final vote because I post this one a the end of the contest ^^"

So, just to put some detail for the quest, yes, it's a quest to pacify the universe and the first quest after that should begin by the way they take to take the universe, by an economical way ? Military or Political ?

Sorry for don't post that, I really hope we can edit a little :x

I like the lore and the history of your Unfallen but I can't really get behind the idea of bringing peace to the universe through war. It seems a bit too contradictory to how the Unfallen were shown thus far, especially considering their ability to sacrifice for the sake of avoiding war.

One more thing - you didn't introduce a hero character in your story and it's one of the requirements so you should probably add one